Deborah Seward

Portfolio of Implementation

Coaching Dates and Notes

  • June 6, 2018 at 7:41 AM
  • Visible to public
2-9-18
8th graders completed Stage 1 of The Proficiency in Sentence Writing Strategy 
-Students completed the pretest writing prompt (chose 1 of 3 VDOE prompts) 
-Prompts were scored and feedback given 
-Outcomes include: 0 of 6 students reached mastery on complete sentences; scores ranged from 17-50%; 2 of 6 students used at least one complicated sentence and punctuated it correctly
Scoring/Feedback-Technically Sound: 
-Use of score sheet 
-Steps of scoring including numbering of lines, identifying complete/not and type of sentence and calculating scores for mastery for completed and complicated sentences used 
-Specific feedback given to students per their score sheet 
-Students engaged in feedback 
-Commitment to learn and teach the strategy and how it can support their needs
*Continue to reference the evaluation guidelines in the instructor manual