Proficiency in Sentence Writing Strategy (SP)

8. Describe Their Implementation

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Describe implementation in the instructor's class with student(s) What were the successes? What were the challenges? How did the two of you problem solve the issues? What adjustments did you make?
Describe implementation in the instructor's class with student(s)
  • What were the successes?
  • What were the challenges?
  • How did the two of you problem solve the issues?
  • What adjustments did yo make?

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Description of Implementation

I have checked in with all three teachers I provided the training to. I have worked the most with the 7th grade teacher. She gave the students the pre-assessment in early September 2021. I answered questions she had during the scoring process of student writing samples. Questions that came up are bolded and my responses are italicized. 

1. How to score a run-on sentence?   It depends on what is going to be the most helpful to you when it comes to instruction.  If it would be complete if it had a comma in the right place you could score it complete and note the sentence was a compound sentence but was missing a comma. In that situation when you teach compound sentences the focus for that student maybe more on comma usage and placement.  However, if the run-on sentence needed more than just a comma to make it complete,  you should score it as an incomplete sentence and note that it was a run on.  
2.  How to score a sentence if there is no capital at the beginning of the sentence?  As far as capitalization goes, I would not count it as a complete sentence if it does not have a beginning capital. I might note that is was a simple sentence, compound sentence, etc. and no capitalization but I would not give credit for it.  The manual says it can count if there is end punctuation prior when scoring the pre-assessment but that is not the case later on. I prefer to be consistent as it is a better indicator of progress and growth.  Susan Trumbo (my trainer) said something along these lines to me a few years ago.

3. Will it count as a simple sentence out the words are spelled wrong? It will count as a simple sentence if words are misspelled. If words are left out then it would not.

The 7th grade teacher has said that instruction on the strategy is going well.  One of the biggest challenges (an this is true for all teachers and all subjects this year) has been disruptions to individual students instruction and progress due to being quarantined, etc. I did share with the teacher some tips including making instructional videos for students to watch, creating Schoology assessments or Quizziz games (both of which are self scoring) that students can complete and repeat to practice skills (such as identifying subjects, verbs, PENS steps, etc.). 
 
jmalkerson About 3 years ago

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tryan Over 5 years ago

Fidelity Implementation

Strategic Instruction Modelâ„¢ Learning Strategies

Proficiency in the Sentence Writing Strategy (FI) awarded to Rachel Tew

Demonstrated competence in instructing a student or class through all of the lessons and phases of the strategy.
rachel2 About 6 years ago

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rstallings Over 7 years ago

Describe implementation in the instructor's class with student(s)

After providing coaching to another instructor, I observed the implementation of Proficiency in Sentence Writing

  • The success of the lesson centered on the modeling of a sentence formula and the  interaction between the teacher and student. Relationships with students are key in teaching.  After the teacher modeled how to write a sentence using the strategy, student volunteers wrote sentences after they were given a sentence formula. This made it easy for students to complete the independent  section of the formula sheets.
  • One of the central challenges of the lesson was the pace of the lesson. The student's attention spans were short and several of them began to get off task.
  • To solve the problem with the pace of the lesson, I reminded the instructor of snapping as a class to complete the "rapid fire" review of the strategy and formulas. This is so that everyone is engaged and reviewing chorally. We also discussed setting a timer to keep everyone focused and on task. If the students know they can get the teacher off topic by asking a question, they are prone to keep asking irrelevant questions, this can cause the lesson to be drawn out.


qparkerfields Almost 8 years ago