1. I love how she mentions art and creativity are important. She does a good job explaining the students new situation due to COVID-19 and how this changed their education. I did not really see anything she did not do well for this proposal. I learned a lot about what she thinks is important and how she wants to help her students at home. I enjoyed that the materials she is trying to send are coloring books, play doh, crayons and artistic things.
2. She added how important it is for Kindergarteners to learn responsibility and caring for others, this was really smart of her. It really helps explain why this bunny would be good for their classroom. I did not like that the first thing she said was that the school was title one. It made me feel weird and like she was trying to use that to her advantage. I think donors will want to help students regardless of things like that. I learned that I a proposal sounds better if it explains directly how it will help students education.
3. I liked that she provided specific grade levels in her requests. She explained why flexible seating is helpful to children very well. I enjoyed her quote, "Happier kids lead to healthier kids, which in turn leads to better engagement and results!" I did not like that she only asked for one type of seating, I think that kind of defeats the purpose of flexible seating. Overall, I think the proposal was worded well and sounded professional.
2. She added how important it is for Kindergarteners to learn responsibility and caring for others, this was really smart of her. It really helps explain why this bunny would be good for their classroom. I did not like that the first thing she said was that the school was title one. It made me feel weird and like she was trying to use that to her advantage. I think donors will want to help students regardless of things like that. I learned that I a proposal sounds better if it explains directly how it will help students education.
3. I liked that she provided specific grade levels in her requests. She explained why flexible seating is helpful to children very well. I enjoyed her quote, "Happier kids lead to healthier kids, which in turn leads to better engagement and results!" I did not like that she only asked for one type of seating, I think that kind of defeats the purpose of flexible seating. Overall, I think the proposal was worded well and sounded professional.