I think the first teacher did a great job at incorporating why music was important to the students, but did not do as great of a job at really asking for what they needed. This teacher needs fun literary books so that the reluctant readers will read, but I feel as though this teacher focused more on explaining why the music was important and not the books themselves.
I really like how in depth this teacher went with their explanations of needing new art supplies. It was a nice touch to add that this particular teacher is a first year and got all of the old supplies. I also liked that this teacher added a covered picture of the students covering their faces with their art work. I do not really have any negatives to say about this one. The teacher clearly explained the need and I believe it was done in a clear and concise way.
The third teacher did a great job at explaining the personalities of their students. Explaining that the kids are passionate really helps in donors wanting to participate towards their circle of life lesson. I will say that this one lacks a lot of detail that the one above provided, and I would say the more detail the better, but nevertheless good.
I really like how in depth this teacher went with their explanations of needing new art supplies. It was a nice touch to add that this particular teacher is a first year and got all of the old supplies. I also liked that this teacher added a covered picture of the students covering their faces with their art work. I do not really have any negatives to say about this one. The teacher clearly explained the need and I believe it was done in a clear and concise way.
The third teacher did a great job at explaining the personalities of their students. Explaining that the kids are passionate really helps in donors wanting to participate towards their circle of life lesson. I will say that this one lacks a lot of detail that the one above provided, and I would say the more detail the better, but nevertheless good.