The donors choose that was for technology for students with special needs did a great job at explaining specific needs that children in her class needed and how this specific technology would benefit. Without giving away details that would break privacy rules she gave some examples of things the children were behind in for example- not being able to recognize word wall words and makes it clear that she is passionate about these students receiving the education they deserve.I think something that could be done better would be going into detail about how each app could be used in the classroom instead of just listing the names of the apps.
The second donors choose is clearly written by a teacher who teaches at a school with low resources but passionate educators. She explains her situation and the reasons she would love to make her classroom a place where her children are comfortable and ready to learn. She says "soothing seating arrangements" but I think she could go into more detail explaining what exactly each thing will be used for and could include some research/ quotes on why this would add benefits to the Childs life. She also has dictionaries listed in the supplies needed but does not mention them in the information and I would like to know why they need these supplies.
The next one I looked at comes from a super low income school and they are requesting funding for literacy! I am so excited to see a school with low funds seeking out supplies for literacy development because reading is super important. it is proven that low income children are often lower level readers because it is not focused on as often. the teacher is requesting literacy materials to go along with a gardening unit they are starting. I love that it will allow the children to be creative and story tell. The donors choose is super vague. It only has a few details. I think this teacher should go in and explain her passion behind getting funding for the benefit of her students because people will be more likely to give if they see passion
The second donors choose is clearly written by a teacher who teaches at a school with low resources but passionate educators. She explains her situation and the reasons she would love to make her classroom a place where her children are comfortable and ready to learn. She says "soothing seating arrangements" but I think she could go into more detail explaining what exactly each thing will be used for and could include some research/ quotes on why this would add benefits to the Childs life. She also has dictionaries listed in the supplies needed but does not mention them in the information and I would like to know why they need these supplies.
The next one I looked at comes from a super low income school and they are requesting funding for literacy! I am so excited to see a school with low funds seeking out supplies for literacy development because reading is super important. it is proven that low income children are often lower level readers because it is not focused on as often. the teacher is requesting literacy materials to go along with a gardening unit they are starting. I love that it will allow the children to be creative and story tell. The donors choose is super vague. It only has a few details. I think this teacher should go in and explain her passion behind getting funding for the benefit of her students because people will be more likely to give if they see passion