The post titled "The Joy of Painting" is a donors choose request to pay for high school students' art supplies using media that the students haven't explored yet. The teacher emphasizes that not all students have the capability to purchase these art supplies. I do think it would have helped if the teacher included data on the student demographic. How many are on free and reduced lunch? Is this a private school where parents are somewhat wealthier? Does the school fund any supplies for students already, or do they make students buy their own supplies? I do like that she focused so much on the passion that the students have, and how beneficial it would be for them to explore new media outlets. However, the request would be much more powerful if it were demonstrated why and to what extent students couldn't afford these supplies.
The post titled "Calculating Success" asks for scientific calculators for high school students. The teacher states that 50% of her students qualify for free and reduced lunch which strengthens her need for supplies with factual evidence. She also describes why the students need these calculators, and how it is affecting them currently not having these calculators (those who cannot afford it). She brings up the great point about having to use the school computer calculators during assessments, and the distractions that come with it. This creates an identifiable problem and solution that can be achieved through donating. This post is, in my opinion, the best and most convincing.
The third post, titled "Absences Go Here!" is a teacher asking for funding to create a more organized "turn in" box for students. The one she is currently using is simply a bin, and wants something more organized to keep her class on track. This post also has a clear problem and solution to be achieved through donations. What she does well is not only does she focus on the issue of disorganization in the classroom, but how it affects her students. The teacher expresses that it stops class when work is mixed up or missing, a student is absent, etc. But if they have an organized bin to turn in work and pick up missed materials from an absence then more time can be spent on the curriculum. One thing this teacher could have done, however, is explain just how class gets interrupted so that we can imagine the situation and then visualize how her request with solve this.
The post titled "Calculating Success" asks for scientific calculators for high school students. The teacher states that 50% of her students qualify for free and reduced lunch which strengthens her need for supplies with factual evidence. She also describes why the students need these calculators, and how it is affecting them currently not having these calculators (those who cannot afford it). She brings up the great point about having to use the school computer calculators during assessments, and the distractions that come with it. This creates an identifiable problem and solution that can be achieved through donating. This post is, in my opinion, the best and most convincing.
The third post, titled "Absences Go Here!" is a teacher asking for funding to create a more organized "turn in" box for students. The one she is currently using is simply a bin, and wants something more organized to keep her class on track. This post also has a clear problem and solution to be achieved through donations. What she does well is not only does she focus on the issue of disorganization in the classroom, but how it affects her students. The teacher expresses that it stops class when work is mixed up or missing, a student is absent, etc. But if they have an organized bin to turn in work and pick up missed materials from an absence then more time can be spent on the curriculum. One thing this teacher could have done, however, is explain just how class gets interrupted so that we can imagine the situation and then visualize how her request with solve this.



