1. She creates a nice narrative for the reader. She also clearly outlines what she wants. Everything is clearly stated and well-written. However, I do not think that her requests are the best examples to show what the students are doing in class. The same things could be accomplished with pawn shop guitars or something. She gives some insight to what the students will be doing with them, but it is still relatively vague.
2. There are some spelling and grammatical errors that are very difficult to overlook. I think that the idea is very good, but it seems like a lot of necessary items that I would assume are provided by the school or district. The descriptions of the uses of the items seem to vague to be included. He doesn't really give enough detail about how they will be used, which makes it seem like they won't be used well.
3. This one seems the most odd to me. I looked up Highlands Ranch and it is just outside of Denver, which I would assume is a wealthy enough area to have projectors in the classrooms. If they do not, that seems very strange for a classroom in 2018. I wish that the teacher gave more information on how his classroom currently functions and how it will function after he gets a projector.
2. There are some spelling and grammatical errors that are very difficult to overlook. I think that the idea is very good, but it seems like a lot of necessary items that I would assume are provided by the school or district. The descriptions of the uses of the items seem to vague to be included. He doesn't really give enough detail about how they will be used, which makes it seem like they won't be used well.
3. This one seems the most odd to me. I looked up Highlands Ranch and it is just outside of Denver, which I would assume is a wealthy enough area to have projectors in the classrooms. If they do not, that seems very strange for a classroom in 2018. I wish that the teacher gave more information on how his classroom currently functions and how it will function after he gets a projector.